[but the strange feeling was gone just almost assoon as it appeared..
the girls were all confued about it]
"..strange.." Mami mumbled "perhaps i sould ask Kyubey about it..."
[Kyubey twitched his nose. Was that a twitch in karmic reality, signalling something? He would have to look in on this.]

[And suddenly Rin's eyes rolled back and she collapsed]
"Huh? Rin!!" Len knelt down "Whats wrong!!"
[a doctor ran over] "what happened?"
"I dont know she just fainted!"